On a moonlit night, I sat to ponder,
What Life is, I began to wonder
But I got so confused
And here are my views
Slippery like a snke,
whom we want to tame
Deep like a lake,
in which we want to bathe
Steeper than the steepest hill,
Whom we want to tilt
Is this LIFE
just meant to go for the kill?
Yesterday the day was bright
and new ideas made a line.
Today all i could see is just one long dark night,
as if none of them were mine.
Is this LIFE meant to change colours so fast,
that none of them should finish as last?
I am tierd
and want some rest, but,
I am hired
to deliver the best.
Learn to never take things for granted,
or you will always be haunted.
Never depend on others to make your both ends meet,
as you are most likely to be left in between.
So move on, as the past is dead,
as motion is life and stagnation is death
Is this LIFE?
Yes indeed, this is LIFE.
Iam not ready
to accept defeat or surrender.
I know i have to be steady,
and keep alive in me that thunder.
As darker is the night,
closer is the dawn
To lead from the front,
is why I AM BORN.
swapnil
Now, that's what I call 'birth of poetry'. If I say, it'a a great work; people would say I am trying to be too flattering. Well, what if I say it's a great worl because it's one of the primary writings of the greenhorn, yet promising poetress. On the lines of above, I think, I can say -- it is one of the finest works. And you know what: I can clearly see the birth of a writer. She may or may not choose to be the one - it would be her choice. All I can say is, God gifts everyone with some talents, and He chooses the right time to awaken that person of that talent. God has played his cards, let's see what Suruchi does!!!